I'm just trying to give you some constructive criticism make sure your words are clear and make sure your rhymes are understandable and little homie your rhymes are already better than mine you just got to put them in the right direction the better your direction of your words choice the better of a rhyme or you'll be keep up the good work and fight for what's yours you want that number one keep rhyming for it
I'm just trying to help you out homie it's going to be a lot more better than me you already at number one keep up the good work sometimes you got to fight but when you fight you live to fight for number one again so keep up the good fight and never give up hang in there
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Quinn Smit
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Abraham Djollo
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Joshua Wilkinson
I'm just trying to give you some constructive criticism make sure your words are clear and make sure your rhymes are understandable and little homie your rhymes are already better than mine you just got to put them in the right direction the better your direction of your words choice the better of a rhyme or you'll be keep up the good work and fight for what's yours you want that number one keep rhyming for it
Joshua Wilkinson
Respect
Joshua Wilkinson
I'm just trying to help you out homie it's going to be a lot more better than me you already at number one keep up the good work sometimes you got to fight but when you fight you live to fight for number one again so keep up the good fight and never give up hang in there
Joshua Wilkinson
You're a good kid man keep up the good raps I ain't better than nobody I'm just me the more you realize of you the better you can become
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Quinn Smit
Hi